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Monsters Re-Release (Or, How I Owned Up To My Weaknesses And Learned To Love Editing)

Hello, Little Spartans, it's been a while hasn't it?

I'm not going to sit here and give you the reasons I've not been around, but let's just say that I was taking a sabbatical and I wasn't at all kidnapped by aliens and experimented on. *WINK*

But seriously, TAKE ME TO YOUR LEADER!

lol. No, just kidding. We can do that later.

First of all, I'd like to talk about my book - MONSTERS. Hold on, stop shaking your heads. I know you know I wrote this one a while ago. In fact, some of you have even bought it. 

Best of all, everyone seemed to like it. I got great reviews and a terrific response from everyone who read the book.


"Doyle was a great character..." 

"...the story was well paced..." 

"...unique..."

"...a twisting thrill ride..."

However, a few of the negative comments all hit on the same thing: head-hopping (POV ping-ponging between characters during a scene instead of shifting at a natural point like a scene change.)
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